Trapped in emotion,
Lost in confusion,
Always looking in from the outside,
The chaos in this world,
Will make me lose my mind.
Civil War and cyber lore,
Millions of cars and a race to Mars,
The chaos in this world,
Will make me lose my mind.
Gravitational pull, the schedule is full,
Man and machine, what’s it all mean?
The chaos in this world,
Will make me lose my mind.
Life is rough and times are tough,
Nothing is fair and no one gives a care,
The chaos in this world,
Will make me lose my mind.
Heretics and politics,
Must have correct grammatics
The chaos in this world,
Will make me lose my mind.
Tranquility, instability,
Limitless possibilities,
The chaos of this world,
Will make me lose my mind.
Nukes and scuds, chemicals and biologics,
Four ways to be diabolical,
The chaos of this world,
Will make me lose my mind.
Friendships that are temporary,
A life far from exemplary,
The chaos of this world,
Will make me lose my mind.
War and peace, alliances, diplomacies,
It will only stop when millions drop,
The chaos of this world,
Will make me lose my mind.
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I love this. I love the repetition and internal rhyme.
oops, crap. I didn't realize they had kept the old stuff. Ignore this one, I somehow double posted it.